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Invisible girl
walking along the seashore
a river streaming down her face

Nobody sees her
only the haunting footprints
that she leaves on the sand forever

If you traced them
they would stretch on without beginning
without end

Dismal footprints on the sand
the sole remains
left of her for eyes to see

Only the ocean comforts her
there she bleeds
drowns her saddened soul

Shrouding the horrid wails
that won't leave her
the ocean whispers kindly

Invisible girl
walking along the seashore
bottomless sadness in her eyes

River blending with the ocean
as she walks on forever
nobody cares
©2006-2009 ~Misteli
:iconmisteli:

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Feeling incredibly sad.

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:iconcrypticshadows:
This scuplted a good detailed vision in my mind. So sad... but so truthful. There are so many invisible girls. =(

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Today is the tommorow that we dreaded to come yesterday. :blackrose:
:iconbraveheart06:
This is really good. It is incredibly sad but I know the feeling all to well at times. :hug:

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“If we were put on trial for being a Christian, would there be enough evidence to convict us?”
"Just going to church doesn't make you a Christian any more than standing in your garage makes you a car."
:iconmisteli:
Yes there are. :( I know others, too... sadly.
:iconmisteli:
I'm sorry that you also know the feeling. :hug: Thank you for the compliment.
:iconbraveheart06:
There are way too many that know that feeling unfortunatly. I keep smiling because I do know things will get better. You are welcome.

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“If we were put on trial for being a Christian, would there be enough evidence to convict us?”
"Just going to church doesn't make you a Christian any more than standing in your garage makes you a car."
:iconmisteli:
How do you know that? There are so few things that are certain in life.
:iconbraveheart06:
I know what the Bible has promised and I believe it with all of my heart. I have lived long enough to know that after the storms in life a beautiful rainbow does appear. :hugs:

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“If we were put on trial for being a Christian, would there be enough evidence to convict us?”
"Just going to church doesn't make you a Christian any more than standing in your garage makes you a car."
:icondarknightssonana:
Its beautifully sad somehow

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